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Message to Readers

idk im feeling in the mood for grim eerie sad stuff

have you seen my mommy?

August 5, 2020

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stars used to fill my eyes
but now my eyes are gray and glaring
all i have is my old stuffed bear
i walk these old halls quietly each night
some nights i go to the roof 
i was never allowed to before
they thought i would get hurt
i'd only been up there once before now
some days i run into another person
and then i say
i'm sorry
i didn't mean to scare you
i just was wondering
have you seen my mommy?

 

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3 Comments
  • chathuwijewardena

    Wow, this is emotional and heart touching! Keep this good piece of work up !


    about 2 months ago
  • AbigailSauble

    Intriguing. I love the contrast between the first and second lines. You prepare the scene very well, sliding from one line to the next smoothly. The childlike (yet lost?) innocence is mysterious and heartwarming.
    Keep on! God bless!


    about 2 months ago
  • Doodleninja

    yo I'm all here for the grim eerie sad stuff XD
    love those last four lines and how vague this whole thing is; the imagery of "all I have is my old stuffed bear" paints such a picture in my head, I love it. :D


    about 2 months ago