Any kind of feedback, I write fantasy stories that contain no present items, so would this work as a story? Does it flow decently well?
Written By: Mist Everlife
April 15, 2015
Swords at our sides, bows acrossed our backs calling danger.
Battle calls surrounding, calling our for war above treaties.
Why must we go to war over arguments?
First shouts of orders, we take postitions.
" Ready your bows, Archers get ready!"
Worn out bows in hands.
Nock the first arrow
Stretch the string