Shavonne22

United States

Hi, my name is Shavonne and I love to write. I'm 14. This the first time I've thought of publishing any of my work online. Be kind and stay cool. <3 <3 :) :)

Message to Readers

Please tell me what you think of my work. This is the first time I've ever done anything like this, but I hope to do more. Tell me what you like, what you don't like, and what I can work on in the future. Constructive criticism is welcome.

Sweet as Pie

August 5, 2020

"Careful hon, that ain't a toy," he said as he re-entered the motel room.
 "But it's so much fun to play with," She said, holding the old revolver, pretending to fire. 
"A pretty thing like you shouldn't be playing with something so dangerous; you never know what might happen."
 "I'll be fine. You gonna take care of your wife with this?"
 "Might leave evidence. I need someone else to do it."
"What about me?"
"I'm hiring a professional. Besides its hitman for a reason. Who would be stupid enough to hire a female killer?"
click.
"Your wife."
 

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4 Comments
  • Ren

    I love the twist at the end! His wife really made a fool out of him. Anyways welcome to WtW!


    3 months ago
  • BuffyNemo

    It's amazing how you spun out this story with just dialogue, especially with that twist at the end!


    3 months ago
  • sci-Fi

    Welcome to WtW!
    Love this! The twist was so unexpected!


    3 months ago
  • addy_24

    Wow! Didn’t expect the twist at the end. Amazing work!


    3 months ago