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Message to Readers
This is probably going to be my final draft before submitting to the competition, so please review me! Be as critical as you can, I'd rather receive a review with only criticism than a review with only compliments.
The first sentence – I elaborate in the highlights.
Throughout the piece, but I particularly noticed it at the line, "My creator's name is never called." So much is revealed in that line.
Not that I can think of :)
Awesome job, keep writing and good luck in the competition!
This was so creative, and such an enjoyable piece to read. Remember, as the author, you don't have to accept every suggestion I make – always do whatever you think sounds best. Thank you for sharing!