CrazyNinjaKid

Australia

14
2005
insanely introverted
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aussie irish
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This is version 1, feedback greatly appreciated.

We are the pawns

August 4, 2020


Everyone's words bite deeply at your skin, its touch like a peeling sunburn.

Abysmally their thoughts cower amongst deceiving shadows, pity dismally dribbles through course bristles of paintbrushes. 

Now a memory plays, the joking words of your eldest brother, the importance a Saturday afternoon's game of chess.

Cruelly echoes through a collapsing mind, tragically the one you possess. 

Your thoughts brutally burn at your soul, this memory uncovers the dread you have always endeavoured to escape.

The realisation of the repetitive teachings, a cascading meteorite.

We are the pawns on the board, purposed only to elevate the superiors baggage. 
 
First Published: 04/AUG/2020
Word Count 99

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4 Comments
  • BlueOwl

    Just reviewed it!


    3 months ago
  • nerdyboywrites

    Oh wow, this is sad.


    4 months ago
  • Bhavya's Treasure

    Thought provoking!!
    Loved this line:
    "Cruelly echoes through a collapsing mind, tragically the one you possess."


    4 months ago
  • Sonia Crane

    wow this is spectacular


    4 months ago