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OMG IM SORRY FOR POSTING THIS 10000 TIMES
The mood is set well. I like the slight horror movie aura in the writing.
There's a lot of adjectives used to set the mood, which definitely brings in a lot of attention. I believe that this is about a ghost with a sad past?
I think the idea of the story was a little confusing. So far, my interpretation is a ghost with a sad past and no justification.
You're very good at making your writing descriptive and pretty, as long as you get your point across more clearly, this piece will definitely have a good chance of doing well in the competition!
Don't be afraid to edit this and re-publish this so many times! It shows that you're improving your writing, and keep up the good work! I'll try my best to see all your versions!