sunny.v

United States

she/her | asian
wtw community’s official older sister
running off into the sunset with circe
est. april 27, 2020

swordwielding protector of all minority groups
satire sorceress, lady knight

she clasps peonies, allure, & love

Message to Readers

Final draft! Thank you so much to the many people who peer reviewed, I spent a lot of time editing and taking your feedback into mind to try and make this piece the best that it could be.

Three's a crowd, and so it becomes two

August 18, 2020

“Is it mine?” 

The girl clutches the phone shakily to her ear, fixing her school uniform’s collar. “He couldn’t be anybody’s but yours. I’ve only been with” 

“I’m—we’re too young. What do we tell our parents?” he demands.  

She absentmindedly rubs her stomach. “I can’t do this alone.” 

“I’m sorry,” he says, voice tight. She squeezes her eyes shut, forcing back tears. He sighs, exasperated. “I’ll get a job. Send you money every month.” 

“He’ll want to know who you are,” she whispers. “Please, we could be a fami” 

The line goes dead. She stands alone, cradling her stomach.
word count: 99. Ernest Hemingway's ability to leave a story unsaid but so there (see: "Hills Like White Elephants") is so admirable, and I can only hope to have tried my best at doing the same! 

After doing some research, I've found that it is indeed possible to be pregnant for 12 weeks (minimum time to discover the baby's sex) and not know! 

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8 Comments
  • mia_:)

    sunnysunnysunny this is so GOOOOOOD! jaskdfjaksldjcsa you are SO going to win this thing!! if not, *deep voice* there will be blood. haha just kidding! the best of luck to you, my sis! i love all the notes you took! it really took the piece to the next level!!! *enthusiastic breakdancing*


    2 months ago
  • løne wølf

    this is spectacular!! i love the subtle hints of panic that you put in this! good luck with the competition :)


    2 months ago
  • chrysanthemums&ink

    i just know this is gonna win smth. good luck with the comp!


    2 months ago
  • books4life

    This is AMAZING!


    2 months ago
  • Deleted User

    WhY Have i not seen this before now what


    2 months ago
  • Jasmine khawar

    Woah! It's just terribly beautiful.
    It's breathtaking!!


    2 months ago
  • RemovedUser1

    Oh, this is written so beautifully but it’s terrible!


    2 months ago
  • Anne Blackwood

    Good luck!! :D


    2 months ago