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are the sentences too blunt and does that take away from the story?
Writing a story in just 99 words is super hard, but I managed to grab onto the plot and sympathize with the nameless narrator. I love your descriptions - they're so vivid and eye-catching!
From the "droning of the planes", the exploding cloud, the hideout, and the emphasis on the narrator's destination--the border, I was able to infer that the narrator is escaping his/her war-torn country and running to the border.
Nope, there weren't any places where I was confused! And don't worry about the sentences being too blunt--they really captured the moment of the narrator's flight.
Keep working on the story! I love it and can't wait to see the final version!!