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Please give me suggestions on....well, anything! I appreciate reviews; it makes me feel like someone is actually reading my writing, whether they like it or not!
Probably Griffin's inquisitiveness. I would love to see you write a story here on WtW based off of this idea.
I think it would be interesting to know how Griffin got to the Reptile Station. Does he work for some intergalactic space explorers or something? Is he researching the planet he is currently on? Was he originally from earth?
I know this was just a short character sketch, but I believe that many would be interested in hearing more from Griffin; things about him and his adventures. You are already off to a great start! Keep up the good work Keilah! :)
- Kit-Kat Sully