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黃愛莉
help girl, i feel a different heartbeat inside my chest.
50~ Sept. 2020

cynics

August 20, 2020

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bitter laughter curls off a silver tongue, dripping down into i-told-you-sos and like-i-cares. supposed 'wisdom' rolls off 'knowing' lips but you'll find the 'wisdom' far from it. cowards that hide behind condensing eyes and high ideals, those cynics. a legacy of sorrows and disgust.
hypocritical? probably.
uninspired? definitely.
is it 102 degrees outside making your brain malfunction? obviously.

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4 Comments
  • elliem

    Amazing work! In a short time you tell us so much. Your writing is absolutely gorgeous!


    3 months ago
  • Paisley Blue

    wow, amazing piece! I would write more about it, but Dmoral already said what I was gonna say so... just read that comment again;) great piece!!! <3


    4 months ago
  • happy butterfly

    this is so cool.just stop being so talented. im kidding im kidding ily


    4 months ago
  • Dmoral

    short, but the imagery is beautiful. absolutely love this! "Bitter laughter curls off a silver tongue" favorite part, gosh this had me. one idea tho: italicizing the hyphenated parts, but that's just me!
    and i think you and abi'spov have the same pfp and sometimes that trips me up but then i read your work and can definitely then tell the difference lol (even tho you have different users, tho i don't normally look at those--oops)

    btw, to help condense links (referencing your msg box ;)):
    https://bitly.com/


    4 months ago