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I love the first and last stanzas SO much. The imagery of dancing underneath a dying sky... This blew me out of my seat.
I kinda want to know who "you" is! I don't think you absolutely need to add it to your poem, but it makes me wonder. Yeah, this is just so beautiful and poetic!
Your writing swept me away. This is a wonderful poem and I really can't wait to read more of your writing!