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I would like some positive, constuctive feedback.
I really like the line "I am writing this letter to help you imagine a more meaningful way of life," because you're giving another person hope! I think that this is very thoughtful of you.
Yes. it would be great if you could tell Ken, who you're writing this letter to, more about yourself instead of writing about his life and focusing on him most of the time. I'm sure he'd like to hear from you. :)
1) How has your family been? What do you miss about the outside world?
2) Could you please tell us how you felt and dealt with the pandemic?
3) In the latter part of your letter you've said "all the activities". I'd love to know how you've been spending your time during this pandemic.
I'd definitely ask you to improve your flow and paragraphing because I happened to come across a few places where I had to re-read quite a number of times in order to get the idea. Improving your flow also has the ability to get the reader engaged in your piece of writing, so please pay more attention to that next time!
Nice work, and keep writing and improving!