Dmoral

United States

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est. 2018
she/her | poeian.
simply a lover, forever.
whales are an aesthetic for me.
published writer & classics enthusiast.

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Writing Streak Week 2, Day 1: Banana Bread

July 20, 2020

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Banana bread is the color of the sun's rays beating down on muddy spring days, while feeling like the oven's been on too long it's heating the house.

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4 Comments

  • Wisp

    AHHHHH, Oh my gosh I haven't seen you around in forever, and I just needed a dose of your writing.
    And this! The description and imagery are just marvelous and I am ever so in love with it. I love the way you chose banana bread, since it mostly looks like a muddy, uninspirational color, and transformed it into this beautiful masterpiece that has me craving for some banana bread now.


    3 months ago

  • happy butterfly

    ahhh how are you so good at this?


    6 months ago

  • rainandsonder

    this is so vivid, i haven't had banana bread in the longest time but i swear i could smell it when i read this.


    6 months ago

  • kealoha

    wow, this is beautiful


    6 months ago