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First off, I love how you use the term of a "deep sea diver" to explain how you immerse yourself in words and literature. I think that it beautifully enhances the piece and really lets the reader understand the poem and where it is coming from. The language that you use is spectacular too, such as the phrases "a cacophony of consonants," "an ocean of letters," and, "I learnt to breathe and bleed / words..." Besides the great language, the conclusion also creates a satisfying ending point, as when I read it, I felt as if it wrapped up the piece perfectly, showing the reader the reason behind the speakers love for words and letters. And, the way that you formatted it into a separation of three stanzas was very well done, as each stanza delved into a different topic per se, and contributed to the overall message of the poem. Nice work! :)
Perhaps you could think about the impact it might have on your piece if you decided to go deeper into the gritty detail behind "deep sea diving" for words -- behind writing. This may sound abstract, but how does it feel when you find the perfect word, how do the words "taste" when they roll off your tongue -- are the rough and scratchy, or soft and languid? What do they look like as you type them/write them down? Ultimately, what type of affect do you think it will have on the reader if you were to include even more details such as these, how may it add to the tone of your poem? However, these are just a few suggestions/thinking points off the top of my head so feel no need to omit to them. :)
Overall, this was a really fun piece to read and review -- the idea of "deep sea diving" for words was wonderful!! Awesome work!!
If you have any questions about this review, feel free to let me know, and in the meantime, keep writing!! :)