Xoan

United Kingdom

pronouns: zhe/zhir/zhirs/zhirself
Gender: no idea
i write my feelings

Message to Readers

Just a random poem but I would appreciate feedback

Education

July 15, 2020

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She's behind on schoolwork and there's no escaping it
shell have to work through the summer to catch up let alone get ahead
Stupid lockdown
stupid teachers
Why couldn't they have chased her up on her work
or at least asked what was going on
why didn't they care?

It's not like shell be doing anything anyway
there's too much coronavirus for the road trip they planned
for the last summer with the caravan
never mind at least she's not sick

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2 Comments

  • Emi (Revival Year #NEWYEAR)

    Aww, yup, being behind on schoolwork definitely has that dread. Good work capturing it. Quick suggestion, you forgot the apostrophe in "she'll" in the last stanza.


    about 1 month ago

  • birthdaycandles

    Interesting perspective... I can definitely relate to the schoolwork part it's pretty overwhelming! I'd suggest having a little look at some of your grammar and punctuation, it's a bit inconsistent in places, but can be easily fixed if you just have a read through it :)


    6 months ago