Xoan

United Kingdom

pronouns: zhe/zhir/zhirs/zhirself
Gender: no idea
i write my feelings

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This is another one for in their eyes and since you can do it in the viewpoint of an object I decided to do it in the viewpoint of my violin just after I dropped my bow and then after I bought a new violin I would appreciate your feedback

Broken

July 15, 2020

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She broke the bow
Just dropped it
My best friend gone in an instant
She was trying to swing it round and switch to pizzicato
But it dropped
To the cold hard ground
In front of all the guides
The cold hard church ground
 
Of course now there’s a new bow
Ordered from amazon
Smug as can be
All because it was delivered
I guess we’ll have to make friends though
Now we’re stuck in this case together
Day and night
Night and day
Waiting for her to practise
Until one day she got a new violin
And I was replaced

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1 Comment
  • Ahsan Nizaam

    It's beautiful. Sad but beautiful. I never thought of it like that and it thought provoking.


    6 months ago