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Just an 18 yr old aspiring to be something like a living, walking (and writing) hug

Things close to my heart:
God, my family + climate change

-Joined Sept 2019, active since March 2020-
prev. AutumnRain

Message from Writer

"In the end I think you're gonna wish you loved yourself a lot more, and craved love from everybody else a lot less."
- a song I can't remember the name of

Current reads...
- This lie will kill you

A friendly reminder that your number of published pieces doesn’t define you as a writer. Some people work more quickly than others, and for some it takes time. Work at your own pace, you’re doing great.

your order ‘happiness’ has been despatched and is on it’s way!

July 11, 2020



“One serving of happiness please.”
that was what I ordered

it came in a brown cardboard box
tied up with string

running to grab a knife
i cut through the tape
and lifted up the flaps

nothing jumped out 
and no one started playing a song
and I couldn’t help thinking 
something was wrong

so i reached my hand in and took a better look
an empty box stared back at me

i tipped it upside down
and shook it all around
nothing fell out
nothing could be found

i checked the label and they claimed it was “guaranteed”
yet another hoax of corporal greed

perhaps they mixed up my order
so I got my laptop and checked online
scrolled through the order but
it all seemed fine 

i decided to go have a look at the reviews
but they were all rated 4-5 star
and I was really finding it all
a bit bizarre

so i sat on my stained sofa
feeling utterly betrayed
but out the window 
it was actually kind of a beautiful day

the sun was behind the hill
and clouds were filling out the sky
i noticed there were daisies stitched into my patch of front lawn
and i’m sure i heard a seagull cry

i smiled and i laughed once
before taking out my laptop and tapping on the keys

4.5 stars
“i never knew it would take me to buy a box of nothing to realise i have everything i need to be happy... lost half a star because it came a lifetime too late”

hey! i got a summer job, hence why i haven’t been as active as i would have :(( and i only broke 1 tape dispenser on my first day! yip yip!

this piece was written on a whim and i’ll probably come back and fix it if i have time later like i still have to do with a ton of my other pieces... cheers to all my fellow procrastinating friends :)

but how are you? i hope you’re all good, like genuinely good. i know it’s hard right now, but i beleaf (hahaha punny autumn!) in you and know you can get through this. take care <3


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  • ava09 (angels, auroras and sad prose #holidayvibes)

    i absolutely love this. *bookmarks page* sending even more happiness your way. <3

    4 months ago
  • WitchyKittyKat

    I love this. I love how it shows that happiness isn't tangible. Love the ending. Incredible.

    4 months ago
  • dovetrees

    this is so original and clever! i am in awe of the ending xx

    5 months ago
  • Kayden

    This is absolutely brilliant. The last sentence is especially clever.

    5 months ago
  • Emi

    This is so clever! The ending is especially cool. You could transcribe this into a short story and it would be great, if you wanted!

    5 months ago
  • Anne Blackwood

    Replying: The Lorax is awesome lol

    5 months ago
  • pineapples

    i love the fun and happy vibe in this piece :)
    loved the ending!

    5 months ago
  • happy butterfly

    ooooh I love this it's so creative! oh that's so fun,I hope you enjoy your new job;)

    5 months ago
  • outoftheblue

    ahhh this is so cutee. good luck with your summer job!

    5 months ago
  • sunny.v

    awwww this is so so creative! i have to apologize for being inactive as well. these new guidelines have me bummed. anyways, good luck on the summer job!

    5 months ago
  • ~wildflower~

    I love this! It’s such a creative concept that delivers its message so well!
    Replying: oh yeah, I wonder who wrote that comment... I’m sure it wasn’t you... ! But seriously, thank you soooo much for your comment! It means a lot to me that you took the time to write that - and I really appreciate your sharing of experiences and advice, and validation of my feelings! *sending back more virtual hugs and Tim Tams from Australia*
    I would sent you a million boxes of happiness if I could :) <333

    5 months ago
  • Paisley Blue

    Yay! Great story--and congrats on the job!

    5 months ago