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What surprised and delighted me was telling a story from the perspective of a celestial body, in this case, the moon. I've never taken the moon as a lonely soul, but after so many years in space away from everyone, it certainly can seem so. I like your use of words such as "rattle around in my empty head", "marinate", and "stationary brain". Nicely done.
What inspired you to write this piece? Was this based on a love of astronomy or a random thought entirely? Also, this is merely a suggestion, but perhaps you could go into some more depth on the moon's relationship with other celestial bodies and maybe even humanity. Not only would this make the story more intriguing, but really give it more flavor too. However, this is merely a suggestion and you don't have to take it.
Hello Starcatcher, it's your friendly neighborhood Senior Peer Reviewer and I very much enjoyed reviewing this piece of yours. I found it to be a whole new perspective on the moon and very much fascinating with how you portrayed the big glowing rock in the night sky. While there are some things in need of improvement, it's still very good for a first draft. I encourage you to keep writing and have a wonderful day. Nicely done!