Ahsan Nizaam

Sri Lanka

Just an ordinary guy who has no idea what is going around and confused as hell but trying to face everything head on with a brave face

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Happiness is a choice and Strength comes from pain. What I am saying is 'If you choose to be happy in the face of pain, Strength is what follows'

Forbidden Love

July 4, 2020

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There's Romeo and Juliet,
Also Jack and Rose.

The never dying legacy.
'The Forbidden Love.'

Love, is it?
Or excitement?

The fading lustre and dying excitement,
Is inevitable.

If the knife hadn't pierced her,
Or Jack had survived.

Will there be love?
Eternal, Stronger than life.

Or an unanswered question
Haunting all eternity.

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6 Comments
  • Jasmine khawar

    Wow!! This is really an unanswered question. So true and beautiful


    5 months ago
  • Lights.B (#holidayvibes)

    This really got me thinking. I love it! You did a great job!!


    5 months ago
  • sci-Fi

    Replying: Hi Ashan. I think there's just a huge stereotype of America itself. We're supposed to be a free, utopian country, but (like most of our industry) it's all glitter, no gold. Our country is privileged, and I am lucky to live here, but so much of America is either fake or unjust. It's important to realize that we're not perfect, not even close.

    Unrelated, I love your work. This piece above is hauntingly beautiful. "The fading lustre and dying excitement, / Is inevitable." So well written and so true.


    5 months ago
  • EdilMayHampsen

    "Will there be love...or an unanswered question, haunting all eternity."
    I'd never thought about forbidden romances like this before! It's a striking question to ask and they way you asked it is beautiful and concise.


    5 months ago
  • inanutshell

    oooh this is so interesting. and thought-provoking.


    5 months ago
  • ~wildflower~

    Oooh I love the rhetorical questions and edgy vibe of this piece!
    Replying: thanks for your suggestion!


    5 months ago