~wildflower~

Australia

15
she/her
Loves music, nature, poetry, emotive writing, thinking
Passionate about the environment
pianist, Christian, tall
~in love with the stars~
Joined April 2020

Proud member of the (unofficial) AHPU (Abnormal-Height Peoples' Union)

Message from Writer

Previously called ‘Daisy + Sage’
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“Not all those who wander are lost” - J.R.R. Tolkien
“You can choose to either see the weed or the wildflower”
“Somehow, after everything, she still bloomed I’m the way she was meant to” - Morgan Harper Nichols
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Favourite words: whisper, echo, amongst, wanderer, lost, forgotten, meadow, galaxy, stardust, wisp, sonder, luminescence, nubivagant, solivagant
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the gravity of crystal droplets

July 4, 2020

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     there is nothing more dazzling
than sunlight mirrored off shiny things
    that reflect each sparkling light
   -until you see the darkness inside-
                        and
    there is nothing more beautiful 
       than crystal water drops
that shower from hollow, glass clouds
    -until they smash on the ground-
I couldn’t decide on the title... which part do you prefer? Otherwise it could just be ‘Shiny things’...?

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8 Comments
  • kealoha

    replying: thank you for the awesome review! it was very good :)


    5 months ago
  • happygiggles

    Replying- Thank you so much for your kind comment on my piece, it really brightened my day! Also, I love this piece and think the title suits it very well! (:


    5 months ago
  • Ahsan Nizaam

    Glad you took my suggestion;)


    5 months ago
  • ~wildflower~

    Thanks for the suggestions! I’m all good with the title now :)


    5 months ago
  • birthdaycandles

    oh my goodness this is so beautiful, I especially love the last two lines of the second stanza “that shower from hollow, glass clouds -until they smash on the ground-“ love it so much! and i can really see what you’re describing perfectly, such a beautiful poem :)


    5 months ago
  • Anne Blackwood

    I freaking love the title and the piece is amazing ack


    5 months ago
  • kealoha

    Wow this is gorgeous! 'the gravity of crystal droplets' sounds really interesting


    5 months ago
  • Ahsan Nizaam

    the gravity of crystal droplets seems cool. I like the message. It seems true every miniute.


    5 months ago