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Is there anything I can revise or improve? Please let me know!
This was super super good! Your description is amazing, and the way you made it just the right amount of eerie is incredible! I also think this is a super cool concept.
Truthfully, I had a hard time finding things wrong with this. Perhaps you could add an explanation of what exactly happened to Madeline, because thought the ending was amazing, it brought up a lot of questions.
You're really talented, and I really enjoyed reading this!