BurningMidnightOil

United Kingdom

currently burning the midnight oil.
she/her | gay

i pop in from time to time. and i may have some new material since it’s now 2021.

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two: please wear a mask and social distance. i know you want your rights, but it’s between life, death and the fact that other people want to live. so please be considerate and do it for others if not for yourself.

to rupture a grilled peach with a butcher’s knife

June 27, 2020

FREE WRITING

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the outline is of a / butchers knife / and / it’s lying on the / grassless / patch like a / carcass. / rust is setting into the joints / like spearmint gum in the / sole / of my shoe. / last summer seems so / far away, / grilled peaches. /  it isn’t a butcher’s knife, / far from it, / it’s a pile of trampoline bones. / the grass has / never / grown well there; / it’s always been / scraped ankles and missing birdies. / it’s made a home of itself— / ageless yet ageing.
​(21June2020 8:21PM)

this piece is so incredibly awkward and ungainly, but the thing in the yard is exactly that, so it’s going to stay this way. love it, hate it, oh well.

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3 Comments
  • Yellow Sweater

    This is incredible. You rearranged the pieces so they reveal it's odd-unsettling soul. It's like inter-dimensional cubism. That was a terrible explanation of how this piece makes me feel. But it really is wonderful!


    9 months ago
  • sunny.v

    “ the grass has / never / grown well there; / it’s always been / scraped ankles and missing birdies. /” Ah, what a lovely way to describe just a patch of the backyard! i’m curious as to what/if the butcher knife symbolizes something, hmmmm. the imagery of it as a “carcass” and “ageless let aging” makes me think it’s something a bit deeper than its surface level. all in all, though, this was lovely! you say that this is awkward and ungainly, but I feel like that exact tone is what makes this piece charming! so lovely, excited to see more of your works! <3


    about 1 year ago
  • Sol noctis

    'Ageless but ageing' OoO nice nice...


    about 1 year ago