Preserve your words.
You have to ask yourself if It's more worth being good or having fun.
I know what I've chosen!
Written By: EdilMayHampsen
June 26, 2020
PROMPT: The Intersection
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This is incredible! Great imagery and an amazing sense of flow and rhythm. Congrats on getting featured :)
Such a beautiful piece to read! Your imagery purely shines through every sentence!
The last word just stands in total contrast to what they actually crave for!
The lines describing them going to work reminded me of District 12 people in Hunger Games.
Beautiful poetry , congratulations for getting featured! :)
love how you've managed to make the second half of the poem so subtly direct. perfectly defines the prompt and the cognitive dissonance of our society. congrats on getting featured!!
Wow, this was an incredible piece!! Your imagery is so vivid, and the message here is very compelling -- it left me breathless! Also, congratulations on being featured!
This is amazing!
Amazing poem. I like how you looked at the intersection of race and climate justice globally. Your imagery gave me chills. "Dyed with indigo and blood."
oh, this is just lovely and a right delight to read. your imagery blew my mind :]
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