Jasmine khawar

India

{Loser / Lover / Hater}
{Trying to stitch my dreams!}
{Trapping beauty from this little ugly world!}

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Free As Wind

September 5, 2020

FREE WRITING

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Today, I felt free as Wind....
today again I got to see colours around me,
today again, I felt my hairs flowing with wind!

today when the warmth of setting sun fell upon my face,
I felt as if I'm catching it's rays.


Today again, I got to hear the music of nature,
​with birds chipping, wind hitting tree's leaves.
today, I heard peace screaming in my ears!
today again, I saw highs and lows of the path.
today again, I felt coolness of the summer wind.

Today, I don't felt pavement under my feet!
I felt soft grass and hard rocks,
YES!! today I felt free as wind!!
One day, after staying for a long time at home, I went outside!! 
and felt very FREE!! And my eyes were blessed with nature's colours. So that's how I decided to write this....

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16 Comments
  • AbellePuppy34

    You've officially inspired me to go outside! Thanks for your beautiful words!


    3 months ago
  • Rohan’s Defender (Rudolph’s Defender #holidayvibes)

    Re: thank you!


    3 months ago
  • RemovedUser1

    Wow, I love this! This reminded me of when people in quarantine get to finally go outside. Great job!


    3 months ago
  • Just_Those_Christmas_Memories (#Holidayvibes)

    Yes! This is absolutely gorgeous work, and so inspiring!

    Re: Aw, thank you! x3 Holy! You're beautiful!! (I assume your pfp is you?)


    4 months ago
  • ElsaRee

    Wow!!


    4 months ago
  • Elizabeth Lewis

    This piece is amazing and so inspiring! Great descriptive writing! I love the line "I heard peace screaming in my ears!"


    5 months ago
  • Landofstories

    Replying: Thanks for your comment!! I'm glad you liked it!


    5 months ago
  • Anne Blackwood

    Replying: Awww thank you!! You're beautiful too! Is your pfp you? I love your hair and you've got a wonderful complexion.


    5 months ago
  • Chloe :) <3

    Replying: Contest Results are Out! https://writetheworld.com/groups/1/shared/178685/version/356929


    5 months ago
  • EliathRose

    Also, this piece is amazing! I love the simplicity and beauty of it.


    5 months ago
  • EliathRose

    Replying: Thanks for the nice comment! I'm glad you enjoyed my piece.


    5 months ago
  • happygiggles

    I really love this, it is very well written, well done!! Also, thank you so much for your very kind comment on my piece, it made me smile! happy giggling! (:


    5 months ago
  • rainydayz

    I love this so much. The repetition is amazing! (also i would like to thank you for the sweet message on my "we are the stars" piece


    5 months ago
  • Sol noctis

    Replying: okay! Thank you then... Maybe?


    5 months ago
  • Sol noctis

    Replying: you were serious???


    5 months ago
  • batman_is_a_cracker

    Q&A answers are out!
    https://writetheworld.com/groups/1/shared/176155/version/350586


    5 months ago