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ummm, anatomy lesson for the day? XD idk what this is


June 27, 2020


oxygen tumbling through wind pipes and into hollow lungs / red blood cycling through a never-ending circuit / muscle beating against ribs vigorously / nerves screaming at the slightest sensation / bones supporting fragile structure / stomach consuming tirelessly / arteries tenderly cradling life in the form of color / skin stretching and pulling to keep everything contained / tongue performing acrobatics to produce sounds / eyes perceiving beauty and criticizing it / teeth shining to represent joy / hair twisting and winding whichever way fingers guide it / soul sparkling and dancing.

to exist is really indescribable.  
i'm not sure what this is, but i love describing things so this style is working out great for me.  lowercase intentional.  feedback appreciated, as always :)


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  • Jo Margaux

    Love this! Especially hat last line!

    7 months ago
  • rainandsonder

    ah your descriptions are gorgeous! i especially love the line about oxygen tumbling through wind pipes.

    8 months ago
  • Dmoral

    that opENING tho, aaaaaaaaAAAAAAAAAHAHAHAHAHAH

    8 months ago
  • naomi ling

    awhh this is so beautiful and a perfect way of describing the human body. thank you also for your kind words; i look forward to bumping into you again around WTW soon <33

    8 months ago
  • ~wildflower~

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    8 months ago
  • books4life

    Whoa! I like this. The human body is so intricate and fascinating, to me at least, and I love your creative take on it. :)

    8 months ago
  • Eblinn

    ooh I like this! our human bodies are so intricate and there is a wonder about being alive

    8 months ago