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I loved the whole thing, but my favorite part of the story was your ability to show how dependent Pat was on Mia for his happiness. I was delighted by your way of switching that up at the end to in a way show that even though Mia is no longer with Pat she still is. The impact she made on his life will remain without her physically being there.
I love how you described Pat and Mia's relationship throughout the story, but I would have loved to see a few of the struggles throughout the marriage. Did they have small fights about the little things that would end in a laugh attack? Were they good communicators when talking about their opposing ideas? Was there a big fight that brought them apart for a while only to bring them even closer than before in the future?
Once I'm done with all of my reviews I will definitely be checking up on your page for more wonderful pieces!