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I really like the premise of this story. It's really interesting, and shows how a misunderstanding can do a lot of harm. I actually didn't see the twist at the end coming, and it was really well thought out! I also love the descriptions you had, and you immersed me into the world really well. I really love this piece!
There's a few areas where I feel like you could improve. One is with dialogue. Your characters don't really have that much personality, and it seems like a robot is talking. Another is punctuation. You used multiple punctuation marks in a row which is really unprofessional and informal. Also writing in all caps isn't the best idea either. I highlighted a few other parts that could be improved too.