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Prompt 3- Pop Culture Essay
The title says it all. You can write about ANYTHING, it has to be related to pop culture, though. Write about a book, about a movie, about a T.V Show, it's your choice.
This was really informational! I was quite surprised by some of the statistics you offered, and I think you explained your points really well.
You focused a lot of the female aspect of being perfect, but maybe you should include a little bit on the male aspect. Men also have to go through something similar. Their idea of perfection are the athletes or the male models. Although it's overlooked, there definitely is not only a female side to this, so maybe it would help your case to include more examples like that.
I apologize because I'm not used to the essay format, but I tried my best to give feedback. You did a very good job!