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Feedback welcome and much appreciated!!!
Hope you guys like it! :)
The concept of the piece—about witches living far from civilization and getting stronger to retaliate—is really good, and the delightful imagery you've used throughout only makes it better!
There are majorly two aspects that you could delve deeper into here—you could talk about the witches' lifestyle, touching upon motifs like the significance of dancing "with crowns of wildflowers upon their heads" and their relationship with the black cats or wolves. You could also add in some backstory about the witches that were burned, as well as how the witches now are 'rising'.
This is a beautiful piece and I'd love to read another draft if you write one. Do let me know if you have any questions! All the best with your writing :)