Just an 18 yr old aspiring to be something like a living, walking (and writing) hug.
Pfp is art by Vanessa Stockard <3
Things close to my heart:
God, my family + climate change
-Joined Sept 2019, active since March 2020-
I'm not sure about the opening of this. The speaker is searching for this hidden land and the old sailor is the only one who knows the way. Can you figure out how I could maybe make that clearer? Should I explicitly state that they are searching for the entrance to this hidden land? Constructive criticism is warmly welcomed! Oh, and what do you think of the title, eh eh eh? ;) Very punny if you ask me... but I'm not sure if this can be classified as a fable, so I might change it, any other title suggestions are appreciated!
Written By: birthdaycandles
June 22, 2020