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This essay was really good, because I feel that many people feel this way. She uses peoples emotions in a way to get the readers attention.
Personal, I think that this speaks to everybody, and she does good showing it.
I feel she did really good on this! This is a good essay to show how people feel. I think that people feel this on a daily bases but people don't talk about it.