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10 second essay

By: Graycie Lee

I could tell you how I feel, but what would that change?

If you said we would be forever, why are we over? 

You can't take my hand without taking my heart. 

We can try to work this out, or we can go our seperate ways. Either way I end up hurting.

You said I could be anything. So I became a nightmare. 

Peer Review

This essay was really good, because I feel that many people feel this way. She uses peoples emotions in a way to get the readers attention.

Personal, I think that this speaks to everybody, and she does good showing it.

Reviewer Comments

I feel she did really good on this! This is a good essay to show how people feel. I think that people feel this on a daily bases but people don't talk about it.