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Feedback welcome and much appreciated!!!!!
What a unique piece! Your title and this particular style of writing really caught my eye. I've never read or seen a piece of writing quite like this one before! I love how you also change the font, how ever you did so, it creates a beautiful link between the words. :)
What was your inspiration from this story? I noticed at the bottom how you have wrote which pieces inspired it but what exactly put meaning behind your words and sentences used? I would love to know, this piece intrigues me in so many different ways!
Overall, I am actually blown away at your talent. I recognise that this piece was inspired by other's that are similar, but you have truly written this in your own style and fashion! Well done. :)