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I liked that you described how the classmates would react. I like that the tone was almost sad, and yet happy.
By being able to describe or connect the classmates with food, made it very intriguing.
How old they were in each instance they described
I wouldn't change a thing about the beginning; it immediately drew me in
This is very well done, good luck, and I hope you do well in the competition!!
I love the title!!