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Everything in this piece is beautiful. The way that you explain the tastes just makes my mouth water and the way you explain the memories just melts my heart. Wow
This is already perfect. I definitely see the food aspect of the writing as well as the aspect of culture, history and friends.
I don't really think it needs expanding. Everything is written at a perfect length
I feel like the word 'samosa' is used too much in the first paragraph so the reader might become tired of reading this over and over but the rest of the first paragraph definitely hooks readers.
This is a wonderful piece, especially the ending is great!