wtw's resident fresh meat *muah*
can be found talking to the rabbit on the moon
Written By: naomi ling
June 16, 2020
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wow! your last few sentences hit hard! when i saw the line "but in the night they may drop from the sky and not a soul would know," i jumped in my seat a little because i love using that concept in my writing too! a beautiful piece! not sure if i already told you welcome, but here it is (again?) Welcome to WtW! I'm Mia and I'm here if ya need anything! <3
"i’m like the stars — still beating during the day,/but in the night they may drop from the sky and not a soul would know. "
just ethereal, you know, sort of otherworldly and magnificent.
replying: hahah thanks, also I saw your message to readers and there is NOTHING I agree with more.
heyy welcome to wtw! this is incredible :) can't wait to read more of your writing, naomi!
Wow! Amazing piece! Welcome to WTW:)
hi! this is definitely a great piece with which to make your entrance; i particularly loved the lines "i carry you into the night with the / stars as my guide". welcome to the wtw community! :)
aaah naomi this is gorgeous!! “ i have traipsed onto the fiery surface, / bathing in all the glory of saccharine, sticky victory; ” i love love how your imagery is so vivid. your honor it’s this piece...the one that stole my heart. awesome work <3 also, home you’ve gotten the hang of things!!
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