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I found the emotions of the narrator to be very deep and moving. I am living in a very warm country, but my soul could feel the bitter coldness of the rain.
I would like to to gain a hint more into why he is in the rain, and why he needed saving. From my perspective, the italics seem to be a memory, he is recalling the warmth of that memory in his cold present.
I really loved the imagery of this piece. There's something etheral about it, though I can't quite put my finger on it.