Peer Review by BizzleWrites (Australia)

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Unidentifiable Squeal.

By: Karma’s_Coming


FREE WRITING

And the stars fell,

they shattered into rays.

Beautiful, but colorless. 

Devoid of character,

and yet better than most of us.

For they do not speak.

For they have no problems.

*Shakes fist at sky*

Message to Readers

Sorry about these titles. I’m not a serious person. I should be though. But that’s boring.


Peer Review

I just love the whole thing. I think you have highlighted the way humans are so much worse than other creatures, even though stars are not alive. so, great job!


Rhyming is always a cool idea, but there is no need of course if you don't want to.


Reviewer Comments

Overall, great job! I really like this piece, so fantastic work!