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Sorry about these titles. I’m not a serious person. I should be though. But that’s boring.
I just love the whole thing. I think you have highlighted the way humans are so much worse than other creatures, even though stars are not alive. so, great job!
Rhyming is always a cool idea, but there is no need of course if you don't want to.
Overall, great job! I really like this piece, so fantastic work!