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don't know if this is obvious, but this is about people-pleasing. I tend to be a people pleaser myself and wanted to show it on an extreme level. Seriously, people, helping others is really important, but don't do that particular thing if it hurts you! <3
I'd love feedback on the formatting here :D
The POV works with this piece....making this interesting and enchanting. Well done! I love how you write from your perspective, it makes it more real in a way.
I would want to know just a bit more about how the person who is destroying it...is it society? a certain person?
I've never finished this review, so it took me a really long time to get this out to you; my apologies! This is really good! LOVE! :)