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this was a super experimental piece but you know what!! my mama raised an absolute buffoon, not a quitter!!
This is a brilliantly written piece! You tackled a difficult topic amazingly and with such gorgeous words.
I believe that the specific theme of your relationship with yellow is one that you could delve deeper into. Try adding in more specific imagery there, like you've done with your parents' early experiences in America. For instance, when you say that you've "never really looked good in yellow", perhaps add in an image of a younger you trying on a yellow dress but discovering, to your dismay, that it doesn't suit you.
This is a beautiful piece and I'd love to read another draft if you write one. Do let me know if you have any questions! All the best with your writing :)