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Message to Readers
my wounds have scabbed over; but i'll carry these scars with me for the rest of my life.
It flows really well, the words melt together and go smoothly, the transition between positive things and negativity go along smoothly, and it's like you try to name the good things but in the end it all just falls apart and shadows take over.
Perhaps you could make the last part, the "why are we" run smoother? Some words sort of disrupt the flow for me, like the word "egotistical". Perhaps change a few words here and there or change that word? But I think the word "egotistical" is really advanced and ~fanci~ so you do you :)
Wow, that vocabulary is something to be envied my your truly :P The title is so.... ok, I don't know what it means but it sounds really professional ;) This is a really great poem (is it a poem? I think so, right?) and I really like it and how you structured it :)