aftergløw [#words]

United States

she/her | thirteen | INFJ-T | ravenclaw
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daughter of hades and persephone
hopeless romantic
theatre kid
tennis & kpop
soprano
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black lives matter.
you are valid.
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formerly løne wølf

Message to Readers

my wounds have scabbed over; but i'll carry these scars with me for the rest of my life.

update: just dug this out of my cluttered abyss of old writing :D

sinful serendipity

December 24, 2020

FREE WRITING

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love is
amazing
warm
passionate
hungry
fake
overrated
a lie

humans are
different
powerful
beautiful
corrupt
destructive
selfish
doomed

why are we
so stupid
so blind
so egotistical
so sadistic
so angry
so chaotic
so sad?
lowercase intentional

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6 Comments
  • Writing4Life

    Re: Merry Christmas!


    2 months ago
  • Syzygy (#words) (J.A.M)

    ~


    2 months ago
  • Nikki

    Re: aaaaa! i woke up to your wonderful comment! thank you so much! i am so glad that you liked it :) and commenting on your piece was the least i could do, your piece was truly brilliant.
    ps: what are your Christmas plans? if you don't mind me asking :)


    2 months ago
  • spurtsofdarkness

    thank you for following me! You just became my 50th follower! :D


    8 months ago
  • mia_:)

    I really liked the tone switch, especially in the love paragraph. You started by describing all the positive things, but there was a subtle transition that I really like. And your title is amazing!


    9 months ago
  • goodbye

    I love this piece, I love how you start describing love and humans with positive things, then switch over to the negatives.


    9 months ago