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I do love mac and cheese. It's one of my favorite meals, even if it isn't always the healthiest for me :)
I like how you show what mac and cheese means to you, and others. I also like ho you delve into the history of the dish.
I think you should elaborate on the personal meaning of the dish to you. That's really what this competition is about. While the history of the meal is important, it shouldn't be as central to your work.
I wrote my suggestions in the passage notes already, so please look at those.
I think this is excellent work. I love the concept, and I think it's great how much this dish means to you. Make sure that this stays central to your entry.
Your tone switches multiple times throughout the piece. At first, it's all about what the dish means to you, but then it switches to a colder, more professional analyzation of the history. I think you need to find a balance between these two mediums while still staying true to the writing prompt: what the dish means to YOU.