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I really liked the ending. At first I was thinking "will he climb back onto the dock?" And then the "and he was kicked into the water" part was so good and I think you really captured what it means to write a flash fiction. :)
I think that it would be nice to have a bit of backstory of the two main characters in the story. Even just one sentence or something like that but considering that it's a flash fiction I think it doesn't need any additions. :) Well done!
You did a fantastic job on this piece, well done!
Have a great day!
Review 3 out of 8. :)