Tushar Mandhan

India

'illegitimi non carborundum'
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I'm baring my soul to listen whispers of gray skies

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September 16, 2020

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oh lord! I have a soul,
but today it died.

no fire burnt it,
nor did any weapon snip it.
no air withered it,
nor any water diluted it.
it dripped from my heart because
someone shattered it into pieces.
it deliquescent my brain as 
a thought was infecting it.
my soul left me because 
my body wasn't mine anymore.

oh lord! I had a soul,
pure and innocent.
for long i protected it 
but i couldn't help today 
when the locks rusted.
i've heard of your greatest
from every atom in the world.
if my soul is a star in the sky,
then please take me there
before it shoots down.

 
In Hinduism, soul is immortal. The poem is metaphorical with any incident that questions your identity and changes the way you see life.

 

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8 Comments
  • Jasmine khawar

    Wow! It's just so beautiful and breathtaking!


    10 days ago
  • Chloe :) <3

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    3 months ago
  • hi i'm jackson ;)

    oh wow this is a really cool poem! i like the italics for one thing (i dont know it just seems more pleasing) and the topic? VERY cool, interesting, thought provoking!! I hope youre doing well these days!! have a good day!!!!


    4 months ago
  • Anne Blackwood

    Replying: Oh coolio


    4 months ago
  • Anne Blackwood

    Replying: Wdym you have a weird fashion sense?


    4 months ago
  • mia_:)

    Replying: Thank you for all the love on my recent pieces! <3<3


    4 months ago
  • mia_:)

    This is fantastic!


    4 months ago
  • Samina

    "if my soul is a star in the sky,
    then please take me there
    before it shoots down." I loved these lines.


    4 months ago