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I'll hike up this mountain under one condition: tell me whether or not you're a vampire. Oh- really? Okay, nevermind. I changed my condition: we have to get frozen yogurt afterwards.
I live near a city full of museums so it's easy for me to conjure an image of "Rooms I've been in before" The theme of 1000 strangers and rooms leaves so much to the imagination.
I think you could elaborate the ending. You and I explored together sitting in tiny chairs. You bring up a relationship and I think you can follow through with it.
Regardless, amazing job!