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I would really, really appreciate feedback. LOVE YOU ALL..*blowing infinite kisses* Stay safe..<3
I was moved by this piece and its ability to show the pre-virus and after virus lifestyle. I loved the descriptions of Kerala by the author and I can tell that this place is super special to them. I want to visit there! The writer has a real talent for using events that are pretty common to most to relate to the reader, but those events are depicted in such a light that shows how big they are to us during times like quarantine when we cant experience them anymore.
I would have loved to hear whether or not the rain was able to calm you thoughts at the end of the story due to the large change that occurred. If it was able to calm your mind during the stressful time for school was it effective this year? Did the rain make you upset this time around reminding you of how life was before quarantine? Did the rain give you hope for the next first of june out of quarantine?
I'm super glad I decided to review this piece, but it leaves me wondering what other wonderful stories you have on your page! I cant wait to check them out when I get the chance.