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my bold move to try and define love in general, between friends, family and lovers :p
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The characters where fun and interesting to listen to. I really heard them talking in my head. I saw the stage and everything! I don't usually care for plays but this one was very good!
Maybe after the characters, give the reader some background info. For example, where they are, a little bit about what the Order is. Stuff like that. I think you portrayed what love is pretty well but maybe think about adding adults or something. Having a relationship with an adult is important too. For me anyway. I rely on my dad a lot and I love him. Or like I love all of the people who are like extra grandparents to me.
I hope this review was helpful. The play was really awesome!