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The title! the rhymes! love the use of colours to describe emotions. especially love 'broken gold', very intriguing.
Love the rhyme scheme here, although the rhythm of the poem does feel a bit off, especially in the middle stanzas. certain lines are shorter than the rest and it can interrupt the flow of the poem at times, so I'd suggest evening them out in order to enhance the effects of the rhymes and repetition.
love the subject matter here and the clever use of colours! only thing is that i think this piece can benefit from being longer and more even, but otherwise, you've got a great one here :)