Hi, I'm Winterberry! ✿◕ ‿ ◕✿
(You can call me Ami if you'd like)

I'm an Indian-born Girl
I'm Bi
I like: Astronomy, Debating, Anime, Art, Horror, Poetry, and Fictional writing!

(I drink a little too much Iced Coffee)

Joined April 2020

Message to Readers

A review of this poem would be appreciated!

I dipped my paintbrush in a lemony-yellow

May 31, 2020


I dipped my paintbrush in a lemony-yellow.
Confirming that everything would be mellow.

The blankness of the canvas was staring into my empty soul,
I painted it a shimmery-gold. 

I dipped my paintbrush in a lemony-yellow.
To only be overtaken by a melancholic fellow.

My canvas was now a deep-sea blue,
it seemed like a familiar view.

The colour was seeping into my empty soul,
only to fill it with a broken gold.

I frantically searched for the yellow tones,
only to find one of its many fake clones.

I dipped my paintbrush in a lemony-yellow,
Conforming that nothing would ever be mellow.

In this poem, I'm just practising using some symbolism.

> I also wanted to try and mix Art, Symbolism and Imagery into one poem and see how it went!


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  • queenie

    This poem has a certain tune it, almost like a limerick.

    9 months ago
  • joella

    I'd love to review! :)

    9 months ago
  • WinterBerry

    Reply to inanutshell:
    thanks! :)

    9 months ago
  • inanutshell

    review to come!

    9 months ago