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Cramps + mystery disease literally forced me to leave my first in-person church service (don't worry it's legal) today. >:(
Wow. I was amazed by the spacing, the movement and tenseness of the piece, and the word choice. Overall, this poem is just wonderful.
The capsules of expectation part took me a few moments to understand, but I did like it. I wonder if there is a way to make it more clear what you are talking about here?
This is really well-written! Nice job!